Hu gum mai apne aap me is kadar

Hi All,

I have written a poem in which i have expressed a power, a strength through which i can do anything in life.Please go through my poem and leave your comments if it looks good to you.The name of poem is "Hu gum mai apne aap me is kadar"...


Hu gum mai apne aap me is kadar
k ehsas nhi mujhe kisi dukh ka
tlaash rhi hu khushio k sagar ko
k darr nhi ab mujhe doobne ka

Hai tapish mere iraado me , mere jazzbo me is kadar
jana hai mujhe aasmaa se aage
chooni hai mujhe jeet ki har uchaai
chahe chalna pde mujhe kaanto pr

Hai aag hi aag mujhme is kadar
k sooraj ko bhi mai jla doo
hai roshini se bhi tez mere irade
chahu to sookhi jameen ko bhi mai bagbaan bna doo

Hai ehsaas mujhe ruh k tadapne ka is kadar
k apni khwaisho ko bhi mai dba doo
hai phool se bhi jada komal mera dil
chaahu to is dil ko pat-ther bna doo

Hai talwar se bhi tez meri soch
hai hwa se bhi tez mujhme kashish
hai bhra pyaar mujhme is kadar
chaahu to murti ko insaan bna doo

Hai taakat meri duaao me is kadar
k marne waale ko jeena seekha doo
hai ghoonj mere aansuo k dard ki is kadar
chahu to khuda ko bhi mai rona seekha doo

Comments

  1. ManjeshMay 17, 2009 at 8:25 PM

    It’s very nice ….a good attempt.

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  2. RuchiMay 18, 2009 at 11:31 PM

    Wah Wah Pooja,
    wonderful poem

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  3. Amit NarulaMay 19, 2009 at 6:50 PM

    Its really a beautiful poem. Really impressed.

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  4. Rungta'sMay 21, 2009 at 3:04 AM

    Really complex linguistic combination. :)
    Ny its really good.. Pooja,,
    keep up and u can go for lyrics too :)

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  5. UnknownMay 30, 2009 at 6:48 AM

    Beautiful poem and good usuage of words

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  6. UnknownMay 30, 2009 at 8:06 AM

    Amazing beautiful writing!!!!!!!!! really impressive

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  7. AditiJune 23, 2009 at 11:48 AM

    once again wonderful shayri :)...

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