A Moment of LOVE


Hi All,

This is my next attempt. Now this time I have imagined one character named "Maria" who has fallen in love and also knows that she is going to miss her beloved, so this is the moment when she can express her love and tell her beloved that how much she loves him.This is the moment when she wants to remind her beloved the time they spent together.She knows that she would never get that person ever in her life so she is requesting that person to love her for a moment so that she can remember his touch till death.The name of my poem is "A moment of LOVE". Please leave your comments if it looks either good or bad to you..


Ek pal k lie hi sahi , kyu takdir se tujhe churane ko jee chahta hai,
Ek pal k lie hi sahi, kyu tera pyaar paane ko jee chahta hai,
Kash ek pal k lie khuda meherbaan ho jae mujh per is kadar
K haan, ek pal k lie hi sahi apne aap ko khushnaseeb bnane ko jee chahta hai

Ek pal k lie hi sahi, is pyaar me jeena chahti hu,
Ek pal k lie hi sahi,teri saanso ko choona chahti hu,
Bsa hai tera pyaar meri nus nus me is kadar
K aaj , ek pal k lie hi sahi tujhe apna bnana chahti hu

Ek pal k lie hi sahi mera hath tham aur apni aankhen band kr,
Ek pal k lie hi sahi jo lamhe bitaye the humne sath me use yaad kr
Jab lagti thi chot tujhe to hota tha dard mujhe is dil me
K aaj ek pal k lie hi sahi tujhe gale lgane ko jee chahta hai

Nahi hai dukh mujhe k door ho gya hai tu aaj mujhse,
Sadaa tu khush rhe yhi dua krti hu mai hmesha rab se,
Khushnaseeb hu mai k tujhse mujhe pyaar ka ehsas hua,
Khushnaseeb hu mai k is pyaar ne mujhe bhi chua,
Ek pal k lie hi sahi tujhse tujhe churane ko jee chahta hai
K aaj ek pal k lie hi sahi,tujhe apni is aakhiri khwayish se mulakat krane ko jee chahta hai

Comments

  1. ManjeshMay 23, 2009 at 4:57 AM

    is that your own creation?....bahut badhiya!

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  2. poojaMay 23, 2009 at 11:02 AM

    Yes Manjesh , its my own thought.

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  3. VaibhavMay 23, 2009 at 11:11 AM

    good yaar...you do visualize and convey the feelings....
    Vaibhav

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  4. Anjali JainMay 24, 2009 at 4:30 AM

    good ,fanatastic poem..

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  5. Amit NarulaMay 25, 2009 at 4:25 AM

    Beautiful, It not possible for me to describe the deepest feeling via a poem :(
    No wonder you are a mind blowing person.

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  6. RuchiMay 25, 2009 at 5:00 AM

    Wonderful!! What a beautiful sentiment,supported with love.
    yaar, you are becoming expert day by day.

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  7. Darshak [beManz!l]May 30, 2009 at 7:20 AM

    awesome wrk yaar..
    repeatin the phrase "ek pal ke liye hi sahi," has given the apt desperation n the emergency to xpres her love..

    awwal..gud wrk
    with regards

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  8. Nitin..May 30, 2009 at 12:24 PM

    ah ha..superb!
    really appreciate ur work!
    jai ho!haha! gr8..

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  9. Nitin..June 1, 2009 at 6:54 AM

    ah ha..superb!
    really appreciate ur work!
    jai ho!haha! gr8..
    NITIN..

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  10. AditiJune 23, 2009 at 11:34 AM

    very nice again ! reminded me of some1.... keep it up gurl :) n keep more coming! all the best!

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  11. UnknownNovember 1, 2009 at 3:34 AM

    really kind hearted ..... .superb ! ...
    ye poem to dil ko chu gaee !
    proud of u dear sis. !

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  12. AnonymousMay 3, 2012 at 12:10 AM

    very touching..good budy..

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