Teri baho me maine jannat dekhi hai...


Its been a long time since I penned down something in here. I always try to write something deep which can touch your soul. I want that whenever you learn certain lines of my poem, you are moved by them. I always try to arrange the words in particular way so that I can evoke feelings in you. This time I have written a “Gazal” and I would like to dedicate this Gazal to a special person in my life, the person who is going to become my life partner, the person who makes me realize that Love actually exists. Life actually looks beautiful when he is with me.



Sanjay---This one is for you.




Teri baaho me maine jannat dekhi,
Tere aane ki aahat me dil kahta hai,
Tere aane ki aahat me dil kahta hai,
Tune mujhko jeene ki ik wajah de di hai,

Teri baho me maine jannat dekhi hai.
Sun sko to,dhadkano ko,mere humdum,
Sun sko to,dhadkano ko,mere humdum,
Maine dil ki,her ek dhadkan tere naam ki hai.

Teri baho me maine jannat dekhi hai.
Hota hai pyaar,maine jana ,tujhko paakar,
Hota hai pyaar,maine jana ,tujhko paakar,
Tune meri, husrato ko manzil di hai.

Teri baho me maine jannat dekhi hai.
Dhoondhti kyu ye nigaahe tera chehra
Dhoondhti kyu ye nigaahe tera chehra
Mere dil ne ,tere dilse ye shikayut ki hai.
Teri baho me maine jannat dekhi hai.

Comments

  1. UnknownNovember 1, 2009 at 3:54 AM

    so nice of u....
    dese r really hearthacker lines ...
    keep it up .

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  2. ashwaniNovember 1, 2009 at 4:02 AM

    Pooja u have an alternate profession ready for you !! Great job !!

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  3. Siddharth RojhaNovember 1, 2009 at 8:34 AM

    beautifully put through lines that express love so deep and complete....Bravo !

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  4. RuchiNovember 4, 2009 at 11:05 PM

    Pooja plz don't mind...As compare to your older posts.. in this your maturity level is bit low( In my opinion)... but still not a bad start even good start in this theme... so keep it up. May be this'll go awesome with music... but the problem is i'm very bad in both :(

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  5. KamyaJune 9, 2010 at 12:12 AM

    hi sweetie ...this is really so innocent and freshy...keep innovating ur poetry skills !!!!! I wud love to ...read all ur stuff !!!

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